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Serpent’s Wake: a Tale for the Bitten

After twelve years trapped in the throat of a serpent, a girl escapes. She returns to her village naked with a monstrous snakeskin trailing behind her. One decision at a time,
she reclaims her life. Each character she encounters by land and sea—brute, healer, orphan, mystic, lover—reflects an unhealed aspect of herself and plots her recovery through symbolic milestones. Serpent’s Wake is intended for adults and young adults exploring how, once fractured, we may mend.

ISBN 9781925231694 (PB, 246pp);
152mm x 229mm
AUD $33 USD $24 NZD $36 GBP £16 EUR €19
ISBN 9781925231700 (eBook) AUD $17 USD $10 NZD $19 GBP £10 EUR €12



L. E. Daniels—let’s call her Lauren Elise—has written a coming-of-age novel that is also about recovery from trauma. She has absorbed that seamless combination of the fantastic with the mundane that makes magical realism go. For instance, the girl who is the main character—neither she nor anyone else is given a name in the book—stubbornly resists any repetition of a trapper’s assertion that on the night of her escape, she “commanded” a pack of wolves. “No one commands wolves,” she says. “I don’t know why people keep saying that.” And while it is true that the wolves made their own decisions, the reader knows that communication was going on during that freezing night, when wolves and girl risked their lives for each other.

Yet this combination of the fantastic, the closely-observed very real, and the lyrical reminds me more of Woolf than of Garcia Marquez. We stay with the girl’s consciousness as Daniels works fiercely at capturing the “myriad impressions…an incessant shower of innumerable atoms” that Woolf said form the lives she thought a novelist’s duty to record.

This delightful book is not one in which naming names is important. Being believed, however, is important, and it works as a touchstone enabling us to know immediately the characters around the girl who can be trusted…because they believe her. Eventually everyone must believe her.

– Michael Cohen, Amazon

A tale that weaves around your heart in your darkest times…and points to the greatest lesson of all—that in suffering lies freedom.

– Erin L. Cash, Former Queensland Police Detective

It snarls and hisses at categorization, but will etch itself onto the minds and souls of anyone discerning enough to lose themselves
in its embrace.

– J.M. Donellan, Killing Adonis

A mythic voyage full of wry humor and shy romance that recalls the fantasies of Ursula K. Le Guin.

– Guy Salvidge, The Kingdom of Four Rivers

The best fiction I’ve read since Keri Hulme’s Booker Prize winner, The Bone People.

– Russell Darnley, Order of Australia Medalist

I would recommend this book for heroic girls and boys (who may not yet know they are hero/heroines who have been ‘bitten’ by life circumstances beyond their control); parents of lost children; students of life; trauma counsellors and psychologists, refugees, asylum seekers and aliens.

– Bridget McKern

What a wonderful story! It’s a revelation to read a novel that combines meticulously crafted prose with a serious emotional heft.

Serpent’s Wake is so many things at once, it resists classification. On the surface it reads as a fable with elements of magic realism. But it’s also a story of trauma and the long road to recovery and healing. The protagonist’s journey will ring true for anyone who has experienced something similar, and the story feels powerful and authentic all the way through. I loved the way the secondary characters, male and female, also grew, learned and healed. A very special book. This goes on my keepers shelf, to be re-read over the years.

– Juliet Marillier, Mother Thorn

L. E. Daniels

Based in Queensland, Australia and Rhode Island, USA, Lauren Elise Daniels launched her career with Ziff-Davis Publishing in Boston after attaining her BA in Creative Writing from Fairfield University. She completed her MFA at Emerson College with Andre Dubus III, Sam Cornish and M.G. Stephens. A senior editor, Lauren has edited over 70 titles of fiction and non-fiction, developing the work of celebrated international authors. Her writing has appeared in commercial and literary sources since 1987, commencing with first prize in the Newport Poetry Contest. Lauren has served as a literary panelist, judge and mentor and directs the Brisbane Writers Workshop.

This manuscript shortlisted with the international Half the World Global Literati Award 2016, ranking 4th in the top 40 for the People’s Choice Award. Serpent’s Wake is her first novel.


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One afternoon, just outside a village quite like this, a child was swallowed whole by a serpent. The young girl’s parents were unaware, mere paces from where she played, of what slid through their budding orchard. While her father stacked wood near the barn and while her mother kneaded dough in the kitchen, the unthinkable happened to their only child.

The snake, enormous and black, had been roused from a deep, century-old slumber. It woke to the tremor of silver charms sewn into the hem of the little girl’s dress and nosed up, up, up through a crevice, urged by a terrible hunger to eat that song. It curled against a sunbaked stone in the orchard, and waited. Still as a fallen tree, the serpent watched. Tiny, twin reflections of the child hovered on the polished night of those eyes.

Of course, the child had been warned about many dangers in the woods. By the time she was seven, her father had schooled her on snares and how to read the land. Her mother gathered wild herbs and showed her which caused illness, which cured them, and how often the two grew side by side. At school, the teachers taught that wolves were for shooting and never to speak to hunters she didn’t know.

But no one discussed great serpents. No one had ever seen anything more than a rat snake lolling in the barn or a corn snake in the orchard, its pattern so ornate, it may have been mistaken for a discarded bracelet; snakes so harmless, even horses ignored them. No one worried about big snakes here. They lived far away, in godless, forbidden places; in unforgiving deserts or alien swamps. Anywhere but here.

Squatting with her dress pinched between her knees, the little girl sang. She wasn’t particularly gifted but she kept a tune and breathed her music in that faraway voice a child has when she thinks she’s all alone. She swept her long, dark hair behind her ears and drew shapes in the dirt as the serpent, still as a slab of granite half-buried in the earth, watched.

Balanced on her heels, she kept her dusty fingers far from her hem. Her mother had made the dress for tomorrow’s spring festival—when all the children her age walked from church to a bandstand and a feast in the town square. The dress was adorned with tiny silver bells her father had scored and looped on his workbench, making extra so his horses also jingled with each step.

The girl badgered her mother for days to let her wear that dress, touching the little rosewood box that stored baker’s yeast. A pattern of roses and thorns curled around the lid.

‘Not yet,’ was the answer, the scent of rosemary drifted from a chopping board. Fat, braided loaves cooled all over the kitchen.

‘Aww, Mama.’ Then, ‘Is this really magic?’ The girl opened the rosewood box and poked the cotton sack inside it. ‘Makes dough rise like the sun,’ her mother said, sifting. ‘Always, anywhere.’


‘Yes. It’s very old. It never dies. Your great-grandmother said we will never run out.’

‘Can it make dough rise in a wind?’

‘Mm-hm.’ Her mother poured flour in a great circle.

‘On a boat?’


‘Can I please wear the dress now?’


In her room, the girl slipped into the dress.

As her mother pulled loaves from the oven, the girl appeared. ‘It’s so beautiful, Mama!’ A tinkle of footfalls: outside, swallows answered.

‘Oh, all right.’ Her mother smiled. ‘But keep it spotless and don’t let me catch you hanging from a tree.’

‘I promise.’

‘Gimmie kiss.’ Her mother bent to offer a cheek and the child planted a wet kiss.

The woman touched her face. ‘Is it sparkling?’

‘It’s sparkling,’ her daughter laughed in spinning turns. ‘My dress is sparkling too!’

So through the trees, where apple blossoms hung in clutches of white, the girl heard her father stacking wood and her mother clapping flour from her hands. She drew in the soil with her fingers—a man with a cap, a woman with hair to her feet, a barking dog, a leaping horse, a ship like the one on the postcard her father tacked to a beam in the barn. The sun warmed her hair and the birds sang and she was thinking that of all the seasons, she loved spring the most.

But, in the orchard, when the birds fell silent, the girl’s song ceased. A dank scent swept across the ground. Stillness unfolded as a great shadow rose, obscuring the sun. She looked up into a face of terrible symmetry, its eyes inhaling the light from all around them.

In the distance, thunder rumbled.

She opened her mouth and felt her breath pulled from her like a fine thread spun and stolen from her lips. Her arms went numb as her fingers held star-points in the soil. The hem of her dress slid into the dirt.