Straggling into Winter

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A serene and very human voice emerges from a year-long tanka journal in which the changing seasons reflect the poet’s thoughts on illness, love, and world events.

The great delight of the tanka is the jewel-like images it produces: how a bowl captures moonlight, willow twigs flaring at sunset, a poet wandering into a fog, pumpkin shoots, playing checkers when the doorbell rings.

Poems that chronicle the progress of illness, the black butterfly of cancer, alternate with visiting wild birds and animals and moments of humour, even in the hospital, where crutches are stolen by hospital terrorists, musings on the Israel/Palestine tragedy, and the nature of old age and love.

Kituai may be one of those rare writers who reject the idea that illness and death are things that have to be worked through and then left behind; rather, by beginning and ending with winter, she suggests death and loss are where we begin and what we work towards. There’s peace in that thought.

Kathy Kituai

Kathy Kituai, diarist, editor, poet, creative writing teacher was founder and facilitator of the Limestone Tanka Poets is never happier than when working with other writers and artists. Apart from publishing two tanka collection with Amelia Fielden, she has published poetry with numerous poets, was awarded Arts ACT funding to work with a potter, Fergus Stewart, in Scotland to produce Deep in the Valley of Tea Bowls. Nitya Bernard Parker improvised music for their CD, The Heart Takes Wing. Composer, Rosemary Austin created a musical Script The Lacemaker, the poem Elizabeth Dalmon danced to at Tillies and The Fringe – South Australia Writing Festival. Kathy was an assistant editor for the Institute of PNG Studies, tanka ed- itor for Cattails, and Muse magazine, is published in Japan, Canada New Zealand, India, UK, USA and Australia, was president and vice president of The Fellowship of Writers, a host of Poetry Readings at Manning Clarke House, the Steering Committee for the Weereewa Lake George Arts Festi- val, and Arts ACT funding committee. She has judged literary competitions and co-judged the Sanford Goldstein International Tanka Competition. Accolades for her free-verse include CJ Dennis Award, St Kilda Literature Competition, Banjo Patterson Poetry Award (equal second), Somerset Po- etry Prize, (runner up), The Broadway Poetry Award (finalist), and she was awarded two ACT Critic awards for her teaching. Her tanka have also been successful in the Mainichi Japanese Tanka Award, Tea Towel Award (Re- sponses to the art of Otagaki Rengetsu), the Fuji Tanka Award, Eucalypt Scribbler’s Award and Ribbons People’s Choice Award.

Sample

Hooked

Most mornings you are at the Dickson Wetlands, a man with a rod in hand, straw hat squatting on silver hair, wheelie parked safely at a distance. Why do we never talk? What do you hope to catch? Redfin or perch? I am told they’re seeded in the Molonglo River and drift downstream to these wetlands. Do you, like me, contemplate the way children who coast here in a pram, trawl the sky overhead, having no words for vastness and unimagined hues? Can you recall a time you skittled pebbles across a creek just to see how often they touched the water yet kept going? Will you reel in old ways of doing things once new to you as a lad, look fish you catch in the eye, hit them on the head before removing the hook? They say fish have too small a brain to contemplate anything, and never feel pain. Would your steps falter if you pondered on why fish writhe in ice buckets five hours before one last breath?

Dilemma

Lake Burley Griffin, Canberra

This is not the first kangaroo to vault a lake’s wall

and be engulfed in water nor the last to be prized

for its ability to rise

10 feet in the air

tail and hind legs a tripod keeping the balance

How to jump back again

Does the splash as kangaroos collapse,

whack against the wall?

Do shadows of the mob reflect in the lake

as they creep forward?

Does sunset grace their silhouettes

with cerise and golden rays

or do darker skies deepen

when members of their mob fall?

Someone must have loved the wall circumnavigating the lake

was proud of it, and rightly so

to be commissioned to build it

fifty years ago

A wall can only speak

of its purpose brick by brick

 

Kangaroos can only keep upright

if their hind legs are not hindered

We can only avoid drowning

in the futility of words

speak of cadaver

rootless as driftwood

observe their corpses

There is a move afoot

to renew Lake Burley Griffin’s wall

restore this barrier from wind

ensure pelicans, swans, and bush hens

are safe

This is not the first kangaroo

to vault a lake’s wall

and be engulfed in water.

Crimson Fur Flaring

Edinburgh, Scotland
I was steadfast about one or two things: loving foxes and poems …

– Mary Oliver

How I loved to run my four-year-old fingers over a figurine of a vixen
head resting on her forefeet
tail wrapped like a scarf around each paw

I didn’t know of their taste
for chickens back then
nor did I conceive how they dug under barb wired coops
to slaughter sleeping chicks
one blood-drenched hen dragged to the den

Today – urban pups
cavort over and under refurbished planks of wood
in metropolitan sites
the way skulks of old pranced across fallen branches of pine birch oaks in backwoods meadowland

TODAY – Vixens sit in the glooming crimson fur flaring tongues caressing tails and fragile chins of hungry pups as tenderly as any mother’s touch.

Confined to brick
and mortared city streets high rise buildings
car yards fast food stalls late night shopping malls what can wildlife hunt?

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  • IP (Interactive Publications Pty Ltd)

    “Kathy Kituai is a skilled author and poet, with many years of experience writing in various genres. For this intriguing collection of new work she has chosen to compose a poetic journal in the form of dated tanka.

    Tanka, meaning “short song”, is the modern name for the classical lyric verse that originated in Japan more than 1,300 years ago. Conventionally untitled, tanka are written in Japanese—and now in English—in five unrhymed phrases to a flexible short/long/short/long/long rhythmic pattern. In the Japanese tradition, these poems have just thirty-one syllables in total. However, due to fundamental differences between the two languages, most tanka in English are composed with a lesser number of sound units, in order to convey the essentially light and fragmentary nature of the form.

    Straggling into Winter is Kathy’s charming contemporary English interpretation of this form, which continues today to be honoured and practiced as the epitome of Japanese poetry. Here we find some three hundred tanka, recorded under their respective dates of composition from 7th June 2005 to 6th June 2006.

    Kathy is an Australian poet, writing with consummate ease of her country and home environment. Australian icons such as kangaroos and eucalypts, cockatoos and wattle, appear in this collection, which in authentic tanka style links and blends nature with human nature.”

    – Amelia Fielden, Poet and Japanese Translator

    July 19, 2023
  • IP (Interactive Publications Pty Ltd)

    “This collection is larger than it first appears: about three hundred tanka printed up to five to a page. It is, nevertheless, very readable, a very good choice of font making a real difference. The book is quite attractive, with a lovely work of original art, Spring, by Deborah Faeryglenn for the front cover. The collection is organized in journal format, with months as chapters, beginning with June 2005 and ending with June 2006. Dates, in a script font, and occasional head notes precede each tanka. The book is dedicated to the memory of Kituai’s friend Rose-Mary Slade Swan, the last year of whose life coincides with the period of the collection and figures prominently in the poems.

    The collection opens on June 7, 2005 with:

    news that the cancer
    growing in your uterus
    must be pruned—
    I write a requiem
    for cut flowers

    settling in the ward
    she takes her medication—
    Rose is facing surgery
    I am safely in bed,
    facing a blank wall

    in your own dim night
    you have brought me a gift
    of darkness
    I had no other way
    of knowing how to unwrap

    still holding leaves
    oaks straggle into winter
    reluctantly
    too soon at the end
    of this tanka journey

    One might expect, at this point, that this collection would have an overall elegiac tone. It does not. The poems certainly do treat matters of great gravity and the collection as a whole may reasonably to be taken as an elegy in homage to a dear friend’s life.

    Nevertheless, tllere is far too much awareness of the intensity and beauty of life for this to be mere elegy. Rather, it is a celebration of life, both its daily wonders and its sobering losses. Specifically, these poems celebrate life in Australia—the locale is a virtual character in these verses, so distinctive and engaging is it. With its cumulative richness of detail, this collection is almost novelistic. One feels that as one reads it—lives unfolding in their myriad aspects and interrelationships in a fully realized environment. Of course, the chronological ordering of the collection adds to that impression, being a virtual narrative of that year’s passage.

    Those who follow tanka, whether online, in periodicals or books, will be familiar with Kathy Kituai. Her fine tanka grace many venues. What is to be found in this book that is of special interest is her talent in handling long-form journaling in tanka. The risk of such projects, of course, is a deadening sameness. In the bands of an expert, that need not occur. Kituai brings fresh insights, imagery, and interest to each tanka while maintaining the thread of the days, weeks, and months connecting them. What rewards wait in these pages for the careful reader … like this one:

    no violin string
    or concertos required just
    yellowing leaves
    and that chorus of poplars
    against the greyest of skies

    (March 11, 2006)

    This collection was edited by the poet and translator, Amelia Fielden, who also wrote the fine afterword for the book. I heartily recommend Kathy Kituai’s Straggling into Winter to anyone who loves tanka. For those with an interest in tanka as journal, it is a must-have.”

    – the Editor, Modern English Tanka

    July 19, 2023

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